2、首段，末段和中间主体段落的首句绝对不能出现语法错误。

Topic：Most cities have traffic and housing problems. Some people suggest that big companies and factories（核心词） move to countryside. What’s your opinion?

§ 1首段思路：1、问题存在，严重，急需解决（陈述形式，最好加入比喻）

             2、什么是最好的解决方式？（设问形式）

             3、一种观点认为…。

             4、转折：但是，我（和…）认为…(反方观点)。

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①首句用比喻，8分　　　　②what的双重语法性质，9分

Like a disease that troubles the patients, traffic and housing problems in almost every metropolis (big cities, such as…) are what governments must address without any delay. But, how? One theory claims big companies and factories should be moved to the hinterland/countryside. Although it sounds plausible, the theory is not essentially/actually/in fact flawless. [或者：the theory is misleading (undermined by the following facts and figures⑤压头韵)

③长短句错落有致，有节奏韵律变化                ④双否=强烈肯定

另一种比喻方式：

Tuning into BBC or CNN, you are flooded by various problems. But, what are the most serious? Undoubtedly, they are traffic and housing problems (省略which) each city is confronted with. One theory claims big companies and factories should be moved to the hinterland/countryside. Although it sounds plausible, the theory is not essentially/actually/in fact flawless.

§ 2 主题段落部分

*  1、段首句一定要有明显的过渡词，这是6分的基本点。

   2、注意要重复题目中核心词。

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